my yr 8 blog

April 4, 2006

Weather warrior

Filed under: Uncategorized —— cheyenne @ 11:45 pm

We can smell the smoke of the fire warrior in the bush at collie rd.

 

We can hear the sound of the bush burning as the warrior gets closer to our house.

 

We run away as the fire warrior fighters who carrying water come to fight the warrior off.

 

Helicopters drop water from the sky onto the fierce warrior.
The brave men spray water on the warrior, but the warrior shoots out arrows on fire.

 

He is angry as a bull being teased, and as evil as the devil.
But the water keeps on spraying him, and finally the fire warrior dies down till all that’s left is smoke.
 

One Response to “Weather warrior”

  1.   Nikita Says:

    Hey, this is a really nice peom that you have made. This poem makes me think of a war becuase of the warrior going to to the house then it starts fighting. I don’t think that I could write something that good. I was wondering how you came up witha poem like that.
    You can go to my blog at-
    http://robin.learnerblogs.org/

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